Talk:Spenserian stanza

Lotus eaters schemers

The article claims that Tennyson's Lotus eaters uses Spenserian stanzas, which should mean an ababbcbcc rhyme scheme. But looking at the poem, it clearly doesn't follow this scheme:

There is sweet music here that softer falls
Than petals from blown roses on the grass,
Or night-dews on still waters between walls
Of shadowy granite, in a gleaming pass ;
Music that gentlier on the spirit lies,
Than tired eyelids upon tired eyes ;
Music that brings sweet sleep down from the blissful skies.
Here are cool mosses deep,
And through the moss the ivies creep,
And in the stream the long-leaved flowers weep,
And from the craggy ledge the poppy hangs in sleep.

The rhyme scheme here is "ababcccdddd"

Palefire 15:26, Jun 4, 2005 (UTC)

No one seems to be able to justify this, so I've deleted the bit about Tennyson. Palefire 17:29, Jun 11, 2005 (UTC)

redundancy

Pentameter is, by definition, made up of five feet; hexameters are by definition made up of six feet. Editing redundancy accordingly.

please check: "Each verse contains nine lines in total". I think the author ment to say "Each stanza". it's not a big deal, it is perfectly understandeable, but just in case... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.184.125.244 (talk) 15:12, 19 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Bibliography

I was just wondering why there is a source in the Bibliography section that is not referenced in the main article. Thanks, --Joseph Yanchar (talk) 16:46, 26 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]