Talk:Death of Jeremiah Duggan/draft

Do not make a special section for rebuttal. Rebuttals should be integrated in the article. See wikipedia:words to avoid#Bad_Form Andries 21:59, 22 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Although that subhead was Slim's idea, I am inclined to agree with it, since this is not an article about a political controversy (at least not ostensibly), but rather, an article about allegations that a crime has been committed. Of course, since the main article is now unprotected, you have the option of editing to improve it. --Herschelkrustofsky 22:14, 22 Nov 2004 (UTC)

I would normally agree with you Andries, and thanks for providing the link. The Wikipedia advice is to try to "fold" the competing issues into the narrative; ideally, I agree, but we just couldn't manage it with this article. Slim 22:21, Nov 22, 2004 (UTC)